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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2013 14:22:21 GMT -5
Names: Yua and Yui
Age: 18
Bio: These twins are mysterious and their past is a dark mystery. They're acute mophobia and don't like being seperated. When they played the game, they were captured, but escaped. They have been trapped in there for a long time and managed to free themselves. During them being 'caged foxes' they met Yanku and Inmu, and started devoloping crushes on them. Yui likes Yanku and Yua likes Inmu. They wear black capes, tube tops, Yua's is dark blue and Yui's is dark red, dark purple shorts with red sashes, black boots and their dark brown hair that goes to their knees, down. They both have deep violet eyes that glow and shimmer somewhat. They never take off their fox masks and speak only when needed to. Yui has a bow and Yua has a sword.
Personality: They're calm, silent and intelligent. Yui is kind and friendly. Yua is rough, sometimes menacing, reasonable, and hates men. They can silenttly agree on things by using motions or looks.
Who they're searching for: They're searching for Makota Tempan, a rich girl who is still playing the game. Her dad says she's there because she ran outside with a fox mask on.
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Post by MiDZ on Nov 23, 2013 14:35:52 GMT -5
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Name: Inmu and Yanku
Age: 21
Bio: Twin boys who lived in a dangerous area and have a dark past. They were orphaned at a young age and have spent most of their lives detecting, running from, and defending themselves against enemies and others who want to hurt them. Due to this (and the fact that they are 1/4th Kitsune on their father's mother's side) they have developed keen senses, become fast runners and, in the event they can not run, are comfortable with fighting back, violently and without regret.
Personality: Calm and silent. They tend to communicate with each other through looks more than words, although they will speak when needed. They would rather spend time with each other more than others although, like speaking, they will interact with other people when needed. They can be quite kind if you manage to get on their good sides.
Weapons: Whatever they can get their hands on but mostly a sword for Inmu and a bow for Yanku.
Abilities: Good senses, fast runners and violent warriors.
Who They're Looking For: Not sure yet, perhaps no one.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2013 14:54:34 GMT -5
Yua and Yui ran to the Kakurenbo Square. They had to search for Makota Tempan, a rich girl, who's father suspects she's here because of her Fox mask.
Running faster and faster, they bumped into two boys. 'Damn it ' Yua muttered. Yanku and Inmu looked behind them to see two twins. Both female...
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Post by MiDZ on Nov 23, 2013 15:13:53 GMT -5
(Do you know what godmodding is? Because you just did it.)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2013 15:15:19 GMT -5
' Sorry about that ' Yui muttered quietly. Inmu nodded. ' What are your name's? ' Yanku asked. 'I'm Yui, this is Yua ' Yui pointed to her sister. Inmu could tell them apart because Yua had a dark blue tube top and Yui had a dark red tube top. But he started taking a liking to Yua...
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2013 15:16:32 GMT -5
( What's godmodding? I'M CLUELESS! )
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Post by MiDZ on Nov 23, 2013 15:24:29 GMT -5
Godmodding is when you control another person's characters. Example you just had Yanku say: "What are your names" but Yanku is my character. You can't control him like that.)
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2013 15:25:49 GMT -5
( Eh oops )
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Post by MiDZ on Nov 23, 2013 15:39:06 GMT -5
It's alright. You seem new to RPing so I'll explain. ^^
Welcome to MiDZ' No godmoding school!
Here's a good table to follow.
If you ever run into the question "Am I godmodding?" Remember this: If you are trying to control or influence another RPer's characters, landscapes or items then you are godmodding.
The ultimate godmodding is killing off another RPer's characters.
Example: Inmu swung his sword and killed Tachiji.
Then you have the godmodding where you alter another RP's character. This also applies to areas or items owned by another character that you don't control.
Example, altering character: Inmu swung his sword and chopped off Tachiji's arm.
Example, altering landscape: All the flowers and plants in the the garden (owned by Yanku) dies.
Example, altering items: Inmu takes the locket (owned by Yua) and smashes it to the ground.
The final godmod example is when you try to alter the feelings of a character you do not control.
Example: A light filled Yanku's chest and made him feel happy.
A better way to say that is: A light began to fill Yanku's chest and tried to make him feel happy. (This way the RPer who controls Yanku can decide if she or he will allow the light to help Yanku feel better. It's nicer to be suggested to instead of told.)
So there you go. If you have anymore questions let me know.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2013 15:44:33 GMT -5
I'm tipsy on candy and sugar, that's why I'm being stupid, kinda. Anyway. I don't pay attention to my teacher too.
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Post by MiDZ on Nov 23, 2013 15:49:20 GMT -5
Right well let's practice some okay? Other people can get very angry when they run into a person who godmods and it wouldn't be fair for you to get flamed. Okay, here we go.)
Inmu and Yanku walked into the square, silent and strung tight as bowstrings. They didn't want to be here and yet they had been called, like something had summoned them to this place.
That was when they saw Yua and Yui and stopped. Those two young woman looked so similar to them it was almost eerie. Was it a trap? Spirits created by this place of death to seduce them?
"Who are you?" Inmu demanded, his eyes glaring at the two women through his o-men mask.
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2013 15:58:30 GMT -5
Yua and Yui looked at the two men and stayed silent. Yui backed up, gesturing her sister to run. But Yua gripped her sword.
" I'm Yua. " The braver twin stated. " I'm Yui... " The less brave one stated, trying to be like her sister. " And you two are? " Yua asked. Her twin went next to her, placing a hand on her bow.
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Post by MiDZ on Nov 23, 2013 16:10:44 GMT -5
Inmu and Yanku looked at each other, weighing their options. These women seemed dangerous, but were obviously mortal. They wouldn't be afraid if they were immortal demons.
"My name is Inmu," the older twin said sternly and Yanku added a bit more gently, "And I'm Yanku. What are you two doing here? Don't you know demons live here?"
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Post by Deleted on Nov 23, 2013 16:16:06 GMT -5
Yui giggled like maniac. " We know. We are trying to fi- " But she was cut off by her sister. " We were summoned here. And you two? "
Yua didn't trust the two men. Their father was the first to abandon them, then their mother. So she HATED men.
" Nothing more. Nothing less. " Yua started unsheathing her sword.
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Post by MiDZ on Nov 23, 2013 16:29:50 GMT -5
"We are the same," Yanku said and Inmu glared at Yua, just daring her to try it. He'd cut her down before she swung.
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